Thursday, October 27, 2011
paragraph 3
lastly,people cover bad things more because good things bore people.Good things are rarely covered because very few people want to read about them.If a newspaper writes about good things that celebrities do, nobody would read about it,and nobody would buy it. So because good things bore people,bad things are covered more often.
paragraph 2
Next,bad things are covered more because people dont want to buy things they don't want to read about.Newspapers don't get money if people don't buy it,so they write about bad things celebrities do to get people to buy their papers.newspapers know that people want to read about bad things,so they write about bad things to get them to buy.Because people don't want to buy what they don't want to read,bad things are covered more.
paragraph 1
First, people write about bad things because bad things are more interesting.Most people would like to read more about what bad things celebrities do.It is in the human nature to want to read about bad things,which make them more interesting than bad things.So because bad things are more interesting, it is covered more in news.
topic sentences
1:first, people write about bad things because bad things are more interesting
2:next,bad things are covered more because people don't want to pay for things they don't want to read
3:lastly,bad things are covered more because good things bore people
2:next,bad things are covered more because people don't want to pay for things they don't want to read
3:lastly,bad things are covered more because good things bore people
Tuesday, October 25, 2011
I.A #2 thesis statement
People want to know about what bad things celebrities do.This is because nobody notices the good things, good things they do are not as important or interesting, and because bad things are more fun to read about.This is why people read about the bad things that celebrities do.
Friday, October 21, 2011
evaluate rating
rating from 1-6
investigate
i give myself a 6 in investigate.
i think i did the comparisons very well.
design
on design i give myself a 4.
this is because i really didnt spend that much time on it, but turned out good.
plan
i give myself a 3 on plan.
this is b/c i planned to make a flipbook, but ended up doing a picture.
create
i give myself a 6 on create.
this is because i took my time on creating my product and turned out how i wanted.
evaluate
i give myself a 4 on evaluate.
this is because i did my evaluate in only a few days, but turned out well
attitudes
i give myself a 6 in this.
its because i worked well with my classmates to improve my project.
investigate
i give myself a 6 in investigate.
i think i did the comparisons very well.
design
on design i give myself a 4.
this is because i really didnt spend that much time on it, but turned out good.
plan
i give myself a 3 on plan.
this is b/c i planned to make a flipbook, but ended up doing a picture.
create
i give myself a 6 on create.
this is because i took my time on creating my product and turned out how i wanted.
evaluate
i give myself a 4 on evaluate.
this is because i did my evaluate in only a few days, but turned out well
attitudes
i give myself a 6 in this.
its because i worked well with my classmates to improve my project.
Wednesday, October 19, 2011
evaluate
i am just starting on the evaluate stage of the design cycle. If this is the last stage then the project itself is almost done.it took a lot of work to do this, but i managed to do it.
Monday, October 17, 2011
question answers
If i learn well enough,i can teach others afterwards. It can also teach me how to improve my community. I can teach younger grade levels what they will be learning next year.
That is how i would serve my community with my learning.
My future projects would become better because i learned the design cycle steps, which could make my project easier to make.I could use the steps to create my project in a better way.I could also look back on this project and reflect on how i could have done better.
I will not waste time anymore in computers because it could have been used as time for my project. other than that i would do what i have always done. Maybe i could also focus on the project alone and nothing else.
I would rate myself a 4 in the rubric. Its because it came out how i imagined it but didnt take that much time to do.it also isnt the best project in the class but is still a good project.
I would plan more than i did before. This is because i didnt plan that much and made the project without a plan. so next time i would plan more that i did this time.
Thursday, October 13, 2011
reflection
For the design cycle project i think i did ok. I give myself a 7 out of 10 for this because i did each stage in a week and i could have done it faster.I could have also spent more time on the create and plan stages.i did very well on the investigate stage and still have to do the evaluate.
Tuesday, October 11, 2011
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